Cashier "Chicken, Chicken what combo you pickin'"
Dad "I'll take a 3 finger with a root beer and an extra lemonade please"
Cahier "all right i got ya down for a 3 finger with a root beer and an extra lemonade. Will that be all for you sir?
Dad "Yes thank you very much."
Cashier " Allright that will be 14.20. please drive up to the second window"
Cashier "your total is 14.20"
Dad (gives her the money)
Cashier "Here's your order! please come again! (with much enthusiasm)
Dad "Thank you! and will do!" (as he drives off)
Cole, remember part of the purpose here was to practice punctuating dialogue with tags and quotation marks. How could you make this dialogue more exciting?
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