Cole Massengale
January 9, 2016
Over the weekend I babysat, basically the hired hands to watch and help out, my 8 week old Cousin, Vance, in New Orleans while my Aunt went to a party. She was gone for about 5 of the longest hours I have ever experienced. Vance cried about EVERYTHING and there was nothing I was able to in order to calm him down. I held him for about an hour until he finally stopped crying and fell asleep but after about a 1/2 an hour he was right back to his shenanigans. After 3 hours i finally got his pattern down; Crying leads to Sleep. Sleep leads to peace. Peace leads to him waking up and crying again. The next morning my back and arms were so sore from holding him i could barely move. His crying was worth it in the end though because I got to hang out with my aunt who i don't see all that often.
Sounds kind of like a rough weekend? I am not sure if seeing my aunt would be worth all of that work.
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